Final production Brief 7 -Documentary 'The Way They See It'

This is my final documentary production. This is my final edit after the feedback i have gotten from my class, people who are in it and other people in the target audience.

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Ancillary 1 - Listed magazine - Final edit of the magazine article.

This is my magazine article final edit after the audience feedback i have gotten.

Ancillary 2 - Newspaper Advertisement - Final edit of my Newspaper advertisement

 This is my final Ancillary for my Newspaper advertisement. This is after all the edits from my audience feedback.

Feedback for my Newspaper Advertisement

I showed my four edits to 5 skiers and got them to pick the one they liked the most. It came back with a 5 nil win from edit number 4. This is because i have been doing focus groups with my class that one has been the most edited one. So here is the 4 edits from 1-4.

My favourite is number 4 and i think i am going to go with that one for my Final design.

1.

Feedback - Hard to read the title and the information is too bright.
 2.

Feedback - The information is good tint however the font for the title is quite dull.
 3.

Feedback - The title case is better but it looks squashed, make it easier to see but not over the skier.
4.

Ancillary magazine article research

In these pictures I have commented about the choice of pictures, type, placement of everything and size. I have chosen all different types of magazines. I choose 2 articles that relate to what I'm doing about skiing, I choose the other two because one is a existing film review and the other one was about a Person which linked in to the documentary brief I have.

Class feedback for my production.

I finished my first draft and decided to show my Teacher and a student in the class to get some feedback from them so i can make my production better. I filmed the focus group we did and here it is.

From this focus group we did i am going to amend my production to what they have said and hopefully create a better product.

Anchilaries Task: Newspaper advertisement.

i have taken photos for my newspaper advert as the quality will be loads better. Also with this i can edit them on photoshop and make a better product. Here is the steps i have taken to edit my advert also adapted with the feedback i got.

I have cropped the image to take out any distracting parts and to keep your eye focused on the subject.

 Here i have reduced the exposure so it is really dark. this is to set me up for my last effect. It will give it the contrast in the background that is needed.

I have added in a lighting effects so it has a direct light. This is to make the subject stand out more and o give it that egde. I had to do it this way as i have no lighting of my own. Now you can see why i have darkend the background for the light.