Friday 19 April 2013

Feedback for my Newspaper Advertisement

I showed my four edits to 5 skiers and got them to pick the one they liked the most. It came back with a 5 nil win from edit number 4. This is because i have been doing focus groups with my class that one has been the most edited one. So here is the 4 edits from 1-4.

My favourite is number 4 and i think i am going to go with that one for my Final design.

1.
Feedback - Hard to read the title and the information is too bright.
 2.
Feedback - The information is good tint however the font for the title is quite dull.
 3.
Feedback - The title case is better but it looks squashed, make it easier to see but not over the skier.
4.

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